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PlotLine/Controllers/AccountController.cs
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@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ public sealed class AccountController(IAuthService authService) : Controller
return LocalRedirect(model.ReturnUrl);
}
return RedirectToAction("Index", "Home");
return RedirectToAction("Index", "Projects");
}
[HttpPost]

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PlotLine/Views/Home/Index.cshtml
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<p class="marketing-eyebrow">PlotWeaver Studio for novelists</p>
<h1>Finally finish the novel you've always wanted to write.</h1>
<p class="marketing-lead">
Organise characters, plot threads, timelines, and story details in one place so you can stop feeling overwhelmed and start making progress.
Forgotten clues. Contradictory timelines. Notes scattered across half a dozen documents. PlotWeaver Studio helps you bring every part of your story together so you can write with confidence.
</p>
<div class="marketing-actions">
<a class="marketing-btn marketing-btn--primary" asp-controller="Account" asp-action="Register">Start Free Trial</a>
@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Losing track of story details</p>
<h3>Your story should feel alive, not impossible to remember.</h3>
<p>Keep characters, locations, objects, reveals, and world details connected to the scenes where they matter, so the important pieces stay visible while you write.</p>
<p>You shouldn't have to remember what colour someone's eyes were fifty thousand words ago, or which chapter introduced an important clue. PlotWeaver keeps the details connected so you can focus on telling the story.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Managing complex plots</p>
<h3>See the shape of your book before it tangles.</h3>
<p>Map main plots, subplots, clues, reveals, and romantic beats across chapters so you can spot thin stretches, crowded scenes, and missing payoffs early.</p>
<p>When plots, subplots, mysteries, romances, and character arcs start pulling in different directions, it's easy to lose sight of the bigger picture. PlotWeaver helps you see how everything fits together.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -173,7 +173,7 @@
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Continuity mistakes</p>
<h3>Catch contradictions before readers do.</h3>
<p>PlotWeaver surfaces timeline gaps, unresolved dependencies, and story details that no longer line up, helping your manuscript feel intentional and polished.</p>
<p>Readers notice when characters know things they shouldn't, important objects disappear, or timelines stop making sense. PlotWeaver helps you spot those problems before publication.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Knowing what to work on next</p>
<h3>Turn overwhelm into a clear next step.</h3>
<p>Use scene readiness, revision status, notes, and blockers to decide what deserves your attention today instead of rereading everything to get oriented.</p>
<p>Many novels stall because writers simply don't know what to tackle next. PlotWeaver helps you identify the scenes, revisions, and unresolved issues that deserve your attention today.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -200,8 +200,8 @@
</div>
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Drowning in notes and documents</p>
<h3>Bring the scattered pieces into one graceful workspace.</h3>
<p>Replace the pile of half-useful documents with an organised story bible that grows with your draft and stays connected to the work in progress.</p>
<h3>Stop searching through notes to find what matters.</h3>
<p>If your story lives across Word documents, notebooks, spreadsheets, and scraps of paper, you're not alone. PlotWeaver brings everything together in one organised place.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -214,8 +214,8 @@
</div>
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Tracking character relationships</p>
<h3>Follow bonds, secrets, tension, and change.</h3>
<p>Track relationships as they evolve across scenes, including what characters know, what they believe, and how emotional pressure shifts through the story.</p>
<h3>Great stories are built on relationships.</h3>
<p>Friendships evolve. Rivalries deepen. Secrets change everything. PlotWeaver helps you track how your characters connect and how those relationships change over time.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -242,8 +242,8 @@
</div>
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Managing series and multiple books</p>
<h3>Plan the saga without flattening the book in front of you.</h3>
<p>Track arcs across books, preserve long-term reveals, and keep each instalment focused while still seeing how the series fits together.</p>
<h3>Keep your series organised from beginning to end.</h3>
<p>Long-running mysteries, character journeys, and future revelations become difficult to manage across multiple books. PlotWeaver helps you keep the bigger picture in view.</p>
</div>
</div>
@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
<div class="problem-copy">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Understanding pacing and emotional flow</p>
<h3>Feel the rhythm of the novel as a whole.</h3>
<p>Review emotional intensity, purpose balance, revision state, and scene shape so the manuscript builds with confidence instead of drifting chapter by chapter.</p>
<p>Action without breathing room can exhaust readers. Quiet moments without momentum can slow the story. PlotWeaver helps you visualise pacing and emotional balance across your manuscript.</p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
@ -307,12 +307,13 @@
<div class="marketing-container final-cta__inner">
<p class="marketing-eyebrow">Start with the story you already have</p>
<h2>Ready to take control of your story?</h2>
<p>Whether you're planning your first novel or managing an epic series, PlotWeaver Studio helps you write with confidence.</p>
<p>Whether you're writing your first novel or untangling an epic series, PlotWeaver Studio helps you stay organised, maintain confidence, and finally finish your story.</p>
<a class="marketing-btn marketing-btn--primary" asp-controller="Account" asp-action="Register">Start Your Free Trial</a>
</div>
</section>
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